Thursday, October 20, 2011

Academic Language Practice Paragaph 9

In my opinion I think junk food shouldn’t be banned from school vending machines because most of the time the money that goes into the machine ends up going to school funds because it’s another STRATEGY a long side fundraisers. I also think it shouldn’t be banned because the food in the machines could be an ALTERNATIVE instead of the lunch or breakfast the school serves. One last reason junk food shouldn’t be banned is because the machines have been in the school for a while and it wasn’t a problem in PREVIOUS years. So that is why I think junk food shouldn’t be banned from school vending machines.

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