When you get to this place you see kids running and having fun. While you are there you can taste the oxygen in the air. When you are at this place you hear the sound of kids cleats scraping at the grass you also hear the sounds of kids celebrating after they catch a ball to score for their team. At this place you can feel the wet grass and you can also feel the skin of a football.
Im thinking your place is the football field? I like how you used this palce and described it like that. Its confusing my comment, but I think you will be able to understand what I mean.ReplyDelete
I kinda agree with Jenn but you did do good on you poemReplyDelete
Ya its a football field right? Its pretty obvious haha! Good job.ReplyDelete
My guess is also the football field. I wish you had organized your ideas more like a poem than a paragraph.ReplyDelete