Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Romeo and Juliet - Act 3 - Rage

The negative consequences of rage is family members can get furious with each other, people can get really hurt or killed, and some people can be held with serious charges if they let their rage get to them.  One example of rage is when Juliet’s dad got furious with her when she told him that she wasn’t going to marry Paris.  Another reason is when Romeo was fighting tibblet because he killed marcusho and tibblet ended up getting killed. And another reason is after Romeo killed tibblet he went into hiding and the prince told everybody that if he was to be seen he was to be charged with murder. This story is related to now because people get hurt because of gangs, and when a person kills someone they run away so they won’t get caught but then they get charged with murder.


  1. Interesting, way to capitalize names and beggining of the sentences.

  2. Hey great job on your homework. You only have miner mistakes but can be fixed. Just remember to capitalize names of the people you are mentioning above. Good job overall Andrew!

  3. Comments need to be proofread, too!

    Beggining ≠ beginning
    miner ≠ minor