Thursday, February 3, 2011
“A Blessing” Break into Blossom Paragraph
One time when I felt like I was going to break into a blossom was when I hear I was going to have a little brother and little sister. When I hear I was going to have younger siblings I was six years old and I was living in Los Angeles with my dad. I was sitting down in the living room on the couch eating a bowl of cereal and watching cartoons when my dad came into the house after answering the phone and told my older brother and me that we are going to have a little brother and sister. I saw my dad with the phone in his hand with a big smile on his face and my brother happy and smiling with my dad. I heard my dad and brother talking about what we are going to name our brother and sister. I was touching my cereal bowl and my TV remote. I felt happy because I have four older siblings and now I have two younger siblings. The experience changed me because I was use to being the youngest and now that I have younger siblings I can play and have fun with them like my older brothers and sisters did with me
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Awww thats so cute, it was good just some grammar porblems!
ReplyDeleteI can't see anything, go back and fix it gutti!!
ReplyDeleteA lot of grammar problems guti come on!
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