Dear Ms Luella Bates Washington Jones,
I am writing to because I just want to tell you how my life has changed since the moment I tried to snatch your purse so I can buy me some blue suede shoes when I was fourteen. Since that moment my whole life changed because that very moment it felt that I had a mom that actually spends time with her child and tells him right from wrong. Ever since you let me go that night I would think before I did something bad “What would Ms.Luella Bates Washington Jones do if she caught you doing that”? Ever since that day I started doing the right thing where ever I went and now I am running a big business that makes shoes tie themselves. I just want to tell you thanks for telling me what’s wrong and what’s right and if I didn’t run in to you I wouldn’t be running my own business. So thank you very much.
Sincerely, Rodger Daniels
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