Thursday, November 4, 2010

"The Sniper” Before or After Narrative.

After droping to the ground to find out that he just killed his own brother he got a terrible feeling kreeping up from his stomach and a second later he ended up vomiting on his brother.After telling his dead brother sorry for vomiting on him, the soldier decided to get up and make a run for a shed that was only twenty yards away where he had stashed a bunch of bullets and guns befor he went on gaurd. So after the soldier took about ten steps he heard the sounds of the machine gun bullets hitting the ground, when he heard that he decided to run faster and after he took five more steps he felt a sharp pain in his left ankle and fell to the ground. When he hit the ground he grabed his ankle and started swearing as loud as he could because of the pain he was in. While the soldier was laying on the ground grabing his ankel he heard the sounds of a car engine, as he looked over his left shoulder he heard the sounds of a mans voice saying” I think I hit him lets see”. As the armored car rolled up to where the soldier was laying two men hoped out of the car and started to laugh and said “ look at this worthless peace of time god used he could of used the time for something else then making this”. So after listening to the two guys talk trash about him he started to swear at them and swear to them about their families, when the soldier was done talking the two enemys took out a gun and shot the soldier in his head.

1 comment:

  1. Eeek! So violent!

    Andrew, proofread your work before posting it.